The Last Sight
She had seen this coming for a long time.
Her heart began to ache and it felt like it would burn her into ashes.
Her whole life flashed in front of her eyes, but now the last hue painted everything black and white.
Seeing them, she knew that they will live a life of morals she had taught them since their childhood.
Finally she saw the doors of hope closing in her children’s tearful eyes as her soul said the final goodbye.
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Note-: The words came out on hearing the sad news of an acquaintance’s demise.
Linking this post to the prompt by Three Word Wednesday and Five Sentence Fiction.
someone was telling they cant cum up with anything for the prompt! was dat u 😛 very well written by combining both prompts 🙂
Well, it just happened. A sad incident inspired it.
Thanks for appreciation.
Beautiful, heart warming and super creative:)
Thank you so much Vishal 🙂
Aah! That’s a sad one but a reality of life. Liked this…’but now the last hue painted everything black and white’… so true. A profound and a fab story in 5 sentences. Well done, Nibha 🙂
Thank you so much Shilpa 🙂
The demise of someone known to us saddens the heart.
Combined the two prompts effortlessly.
Yes Indeed.
Thanks for the appreciation 🙂
Touching.
Thanks 🙂
What an apt post for Mother’s Day, Nibha, sad though it is.
Thanks so much 🙂
So sad, but at least she prepared them to go on without her.
Yup, But loss is a loss, especially when its a loss of mother..