She could feel the goosebumps as she saw her villain fast approaching her, drops of sweats making her feel squeamish.
Fear has painted her face white, lips trembled and her eyes seem to pop out in horror.
She kept screaming for help at the top of her voice every few seconds, hoping someone would hear her but there was nobody to rescue.
Already sitting in the corner of the secluded room, she could see no escape out of here.
After minutes which seemed like hours to her, she gained courage to take off her slippers and kill the villainous spider.
Word Count: 100
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20 thoughts on “Fearful Encounter”
seriously!!!! Spider??? U gave me a scare!
Hahah! Mission accomplished! 😛
A surprise ending is always good. As a writer, I advise you to stick within the close point of view. She couldn’t see her white face or her eyes popping. Instead, describe how those things affected her.
Thanks for the suggestion! It was written from third person perspective though.
Hahaha…loved it, Nibha! Spider? And, all the time I thought it was some ‘villain’! 🙂
Hahaha! Glad you enjoyed it! 😉
Ahh the spider… the ones here are the size of my palm… scares the hell out of me 🙂
I am scared of them too!
God! A lizard would bring out these reactions in me, though I wouldnt have the courage to kill it!
Oh love the twist Nibha: well done! 🙂 <3
Thanks Elly! Glad you loved it 🙂
Oooh! Nicely done! (With the twist, of course)
Haha! You’re just being nice 🙂 But I’ll take it because I’m in dire need of some compliments.
No seriously, I am a big fan of your fiction.
P.s. you can have as much compliments you want! I have a bag full of it 😀
I’m honoured then, Nibha 🙂
Honour?? :O Pleasure is all mine! 🙂
That is one cool take on the prompt. Love the spider!! 😀 😀
Thanks!! You love spider?? 😮
I loved that punch in the end 🙂
Loved the ending !!