Thoughtless Thoughts
The time I read this week’s Saturday prompt of Write Tribe, I thought what happens when we free our mind. It’s the thoughts all over the mind! I thought, is it possible to Free the mind and still bind it 100 words. I tried. Here’s what I scribbled.
Sitting with random thoughts,
thoughts that killed the time;
I took a few words,
started to make them rhyme.
River of endless thoughts,
constantly flows in the mind;
Random memories, sweet and sour,
Hidden in heart, we find.
Thoughts of life and death,
Of future, present and past;
Of people, friends and family,
Nostalgic are thoughts that last.
Those constant little thoughts,
will make you feel so blue;
You try pushing them away,
But there’s nothing you can do.
Moments of victory and joy,
Thoughts of glory and achievement;
fills your heart with pride,
Leaves no reason to ever lament.
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So perfect for the prompt!
Thank you Michelle 🙂
wow it is exactly what happens when i sit to write.its like my mind talking.and perfect for the prompt.http://pastiche.webnode.com/news/black-widow/
it happens all the time with me too!
Oh wow and this is just too awesome more so a it’s free flowing!
Thank you so much 🙂
Simple words and beautiful thoughts and an excellent take on the prompt. enjoyed reading your poem.
Thank you so much Kalpana!
Beautiful thoughts. 🙂
Thank you Jyothi
Loved your take on the prompt. 🙂
Here is mine – http://dreamzandclouds.wordpress.com/2014/02/11/easy-is-difficult/
Thank you so much 🙂
Welcome to A to Z theme reveal! Lovely poetry Curious to see what your theme will be!
Thank you! Still thinking about the theme though!
Beautiful poem. Sometimes, we gotta go with the flow in our journey of life:)
http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/02/09/100-words-on-saturday-just-free-your-mind
Yes indeed. thank you 🙂
If this is what you wrote with a free mind then kudos girl, its awesome 🙂
Thank you so much! And yes I wrote it with free mind!
Prefect rhyme for the prompt in 100 words. Good work !
Thank you 🙂